Checking out The Lucent Fractured Mind today. I am flipping through my own surreal action mystery comic to show the pages.

This is a bit different because I actually wrote this story alongside my artist, Rod Looper. Rather than a formal critique, I am walking through the narrative flow and looking at the panels just as I would with any other book. It is a surreal action mystery set entirely in a dream, and it is fascinating to look back at the comic book art now that it is finished.

We are focusing on the visual progression and the specific choices made during the creation process. If you enjoy seeing how an indie comic comes together page by page, this is the place to be. It is always a unique experience to share my own work, and I want to highlight the collaborative effort that went into this project.

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0:00 Crafting the Lucent Fractured Mind
1:10 Exploring the Dream Timeline
3:30 A Confrontation in the Seedy Corners
5:33 The Mysterious Damon Spector
7:39 Mirroring the Fractured Psyche